User blog:Zendarmanitan/Path of Two almost done! Help and Constructive criticism encouraged

Path of Two has only one saga left! I'm almost done V2 of this fan fiction. With Path of Two almost done, I want to see what reading don't understand about it. Is there anything that you think doesn't make sense or is inconsistent? I woul like to hear what you feel needs improving and what inconsistencies you guys find so that I can fix them.

Also, is there anyone who can help with character pictures? I can't draw them. I'll also be willing to help out with other fan fictions if someone wants me to see what I think about it. (I would prefer if it doesn't inculde GT. I'm not really much of a fan of it.)