User blog:Geti186/Monthly Character Competition (November) Entries

It's been quite some time since I last updated you guys, so I will update you guys now!

Below are the entries provided by the beloved members of the Lookout Community! Let's have a look at them shall we?

Charon (User:Arishok Frieza)
Charon is the second Tier 3 character which Arishok has made, and is quite the powerful opponent to face!

Pros

 * Simple
 * Unique Spells
 * Good organization
 * Cool background

Cons

 * Not entirely original
 * Grammatical errors here and there
 * No-limit fallacies in some abilities
 * Could use a little bit more explanation

Kain (User:Driver25)
This is the first entry by Driver25 in the competition! -Round of Applause- Kain is a simple ambassador from another planet.

Pros

 * Simple Backstory
 * Easy-to-read

Cons

 * Could add more detail
 * Context for backstory is flawed (the Lookout Crew isn't exactly recognized)

Nach (Role-Play) (User:Fangirl4545)
Nach is the son of last month's competitor, Bage!

Pros

 * Troll backstory (1 week in HBTC? LOL)
 * Simple personality
 * Detailed RP battles (thumbs up)
 * Nice skills (though most of them are overdone, I like the detail put into it though)

Cons

 * Not-so-unique skillset
 * Average detail (for abilities)

Legato (User:ParadoxSpiral)
Last month's winner, MN himself, has sent in a new character!

Pros

 * Nice background
 * Interesting Personality
 * Good combination of abilities

Cons

 * Boring Biography (from History, nonetheless, no twists)
 * Abilities are done before by you, no actual ability unique to this character
 * You have mistook what Time Alteration does (your heartbeat does not slow because of time)

Grey (User:Freezing-Soul)
Looks like old contender Goten is here! Grey is his pet demon, who is uselessly arrogant

Pros

 * Long backstory
 * Relatively Detailed abilities
 * Zabuza Picture

Cons

 * Overused abilities
 * "Mind" does not make sense whatsoever
 * Backstory is too biased (No threat warranting his attention? No such thing in fiction)
 * Angel Souls being his sword's material needs more expansion and explanation